Unnecessary Comma

A spooky castle.There are many, many rules governing how writers may use commas. Paranoid from red marks on their papers, some writers end up using commas wherever possible to avoid getting marked for mistakes. You should resist this urge! Unnecessary commas can be just as distracting as missing ones.

Coordinating Conjunctions

Most unnecessary commas come from misapplying comma rules. For instance, we discussed using coordinating conjunctions like and, but, or so, in our discussion of comma splices. Just because you need to use commas with coordinating conjunctions sometimes doesn’t mean you’ll use them all the time.

I have a wide variety of supernatural powers, but wish I had the power to go out in the daylight.

In this example, you don’t need a comma before the but because you aren’t combining two independent clauses. The second half of the sentence is dependent upon the first half. Here is a corrected version of the sentence:

I have a wide variety of supernatural powers but wish I had the power to go out in the daylight.

Correlative Conjunctions

Another place writers might be tempted to insert unnecessary commas is when using correlative conjunctions. There are word combinations like either/or and both/and that connect a sentence.

Either I get out of the sun, or it’s going to start smelling like barbecue.

Commas aren’t necessary when combining sentence elements with correlative conjunctions.

Either I get out of the sun or it’s going to start smelling like barbecue.

The exception to this rule is the correlative conjunction if/then, which always requires a comma.

If the blood bank is closed then I’ll have to make my withdrawal elsewhere.
If the blood bank is closed, then I’ll have to make my withdrawal elsewhere.

Non-Essential Information

Have you come across a sentence like this?

The church offered refreshments, like holy water and garlic, that I simply could not partake in.

In the above sentence, commas are used correctly to separate non-essential (but colorful) information from the rest of the sentence. Having seen this construction, some writers might end up using commas unnecessarily around information that is essential to the sentence.

I find that a little fear is the best seasoning, for my food, so I often sneak up on my husband while he cooks and frighten him.

In this example, for my food is not extra information that should be set off with commas. But, you do need a comma before the so to separate the two independent clauses. Here is a corrected version of the sentence:

I find that a little fear is the best seasoning for my food, so I often sneak up on my husband while he cooks and frighten him.

For more information on these comma rules, be sure to check out the Comma section in the Punctuation area of Grammar Essentials.

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